lame

it was too short, there wasnt enough action, the ending was lame, and a story could help

I Think...

More shooting, less talking next time. Otherwise good.

Hmm...

While the pivot animation was decent, I have to say my overall impression of this particular flash leaves me feeling a bit confused. It would seem to be that after having watched this animation I'm not entirely sure of what the point behind it is. What I'm getting at is this: I'm a big fan of pivot animations, however due to the nature of them I find that the more successful pivot animations, like most other animations, have a purpose, or a story line to follow. Granted there was an obstacle for this supposed hero to overcome that's generally not enough to make a pivot animation interesting to watch. I suppose what I'm ultimately trying to get at is that I am not sure if this is part of a series of animations, present, or to come, or perhaps just an attempt to fill in some vacant slots in a clan... I don't mean to come off in a rude or condescending manner but these are just my thoughts, and advice. Sorry for the lengthy review!