Thats was

great, I think considering you did it all in 12 days, which considering the smoothness etc is pretty amazing. I liked it alot, happy person here to day!

It was great

good stuff for real really smooth anymation and great concept, the only thing I would change its that the fairy was more like a halloween fairy aside from that its still a 10/10 good job

Good stuff.

Don't mind the guy below who didn't read the description.

meh

The animation was good and so was the music. yes you did over use a few things but it is to be expected. but i think you lacked in storyline. the fairy girl thing came in why? the monster was under his bed why? (boogie man?) and what was the orb. if that was something to do about halloween it should have been shown more. plus why did the fairy girl thing try to protect it if she could just kill the monster? cuz it seems like she didnt have a problem? what was the flashing light aswell? it seemed like a pointless part in the story. the monster didnt fight back. and she done nothing to protect herself. if he can teleport from one string what made her think that moving to another one would help? she would have fought it head on. anyway sorry for ranting but i think you made the story too obscure to your audience

Alright

Not to bad and a neat story fun to watch but utilizing the same loops over and over can become a bit too obvious, and while the loops used like a few of the shadows flame breath and the punches form the clown weren't poorly illustrated they did seem monotonous after the first couple times.