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Oct 30, 2011 | 4:49 AM EDT

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This isn't my first flash,so yeah,be as good as you can with the critisism;don't go light.
Anyway...If by any chance this gets stolen,in which I highly doubt,just let me know.
Btw,it has no loading screen or replay button,just be patient and when it ends,refresh.



Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Don't submit unfinished things or 'tests'.

It's not bad, but it's too short and it's unfinished.

The problem is that this animation is a fragment. It's a piece of what could eventually be turned into a movie, but for now, it's nothing more than a part or a bit.

The problem is not if it's bad, but rather if it's good. When it's bad, it gets a low score and gets blammed and is forgotten and gone. Done.

If it's a 'good' piece, then people get confused and may pass it. The problem is that then we've got a fragment of a piece of a bit of a flash floating around newgrounds forever, and what's the point of that? That's not what Newgrounds is about.

What's here isn't bad. But since it passed, it'll be forever unfinished, because if you complete this into a vid, you'll submit the finished item as a separate item and we'll have both finished and unfinished items floating around here, and that's not what Newgrounds is about.

It's not bad. Just, please send thru completed items. :)

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Rated 3 / 5 stars

Well okay then.

Since you asked not to be light that's exactly what I'm going to do. First of the fact I see nothing but a loop of a guy getting his ass kicked makes it very strange, and weird, when the white haired boy blacks the zombie with his foot ( if you notice) it seperates from the ankle in a weird way, instead of the vanishing the feet in the air have. (if you freeze it or search for the frame you will know what i mean).
Other than that the quality and the special effects is pretty good. If you don't already, learn the basics like the loading screen AND play button, and an actual ending, thing about loops is that people sometimes don't realize they ended.

I hope this helps you, keep up the good work, make more animations, grab a good plot and make episodes, most people decide to make episodes but then they don't commit.



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

That is epic-ly awesome!!!

That is way better than my animations! What program do you use to make these animations?