It shows a lot of potential
What you're missing at the moment is timing, suspense, and things like that. You need to give it time. The main problem I had with this animation was that it seemed rushed. By that, I don't mean that you didn't put enough time into making it, I mean that the events where crammed into a too small place for it to be properly effective. Another problem was the joke thing at the end. Either try to make it funny, or creepy. You didn't pull of mixing the two in this animation. The rest of it has a lot of potential though. You've got interesting characters and good animation. With some improvements, your work could become excellent.
Yeah I know I have a weakness with my writing, especially when I don't have much time to do the toons in. In all honesty the ending of this one changed like, four times too, I really need to learn from that!
Thanks for the constructive feedback, and for only knocking off 2 points rather than giving a 0 or something! :p
i like it
short, witty, and quite interesting
i like that antique guy..or what ever that time pet's name is...cool beans dude
and btw, didn't really need subtitles. :D
I didnt think it was THAT funny
it was kinda short too
Good job, ending bit meh
Animation was nice and voice acting was solid. The humor was good, but given the main characters interesting powers the ending was a bit abrupt.
Aye I had to cut it short due to time and my Uni work
I like it, but
Has potential. I like it. It's original and has a good story which most people cant pull off. Also the animation is good and the personalities really suit the characters. Has a good sense of comedy, but u kind of ruined it with the ending. U made it seem like there was going to be a memorable scene but u just ruined it. This is my opinion and if i hurt u sorry.
Yeah I know about the ending, I was really running out of time with my Uni work going on as well as my personal animations.