not bad for you first sumbission.
try to work more on it. Looking at walk sequences could help you get better with the walking.
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I thought of this movie while walking my dog and I saw I kind being teased for wearing a
pink t-shirt and shouting "I will have my justice someday". This was my first flash movie
that I made and found the experience to be very fun and exciting. Enjoy the movie :D
okish for a first
Artwork is lousy, story is ok, ok for a first, but dont post it on here.
En het moraal van het verhaal is
Neem nooit wraak?
ok for a first animation...
for a first flash animation it was cute.
but i wouldn't recommend posting it on newgrounds, people here a very judgmental...
you should work on the smoothness of the motion, for example the walking was a bit too slow.
if you are doing a walk from the side, the legs should come out from the same point.
you should really think of better ideas too. this wasn't very interesting or funny for me.
so, keep on trying and watch some tutorials on flash animations, it could really help you get better :)
Hhahah!
Nice for a first. Just improve on your art though.
The story is funny enough to laugh even though the art wasn't that good!
Keep it up! Just practice and practice!