2/10
graphics: 1/3 [I can tell what you drew there... it's a start]
sound: 1/3 [Fitting, copyrighted music you got there]
story: 0/3 [story? I thing NOT!]
extra: 0/1 [Don't worry, I rarely give this one]
[You need more story... well actually, you need a story in the first place. Please read my other two reveiws for more advice]