These are good
You have the characters well balanced and some unique things I haven't seen before lots of imagination I like it!
Let's see the next one :)
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Ugh. This seems even more flawed than the first episode.
I got even more lazy on the background. Now I no longer care about backgrounds anymore. Avania is about the characters and story not the backgrounds. Pay attention to the story and dialogue. The whole point of this is the plot, not the crappy animation o.O
I suck at drawing wolfs so just pretend that the wolf is more fluffier. I'm trying to avoid animating fight scenes. That's something I'm really bad at...
Summary of the episode. (For those who don't understand):
Annoyed at the the kid who made his brother cry. The leader of the robbers is ready to attack. An animal (who has been watching him since he met the rabbit) decides he is no threat to his master. He is about to leave when something urges him to save the boy. He is a rama (shapeshifter) and transformed into a wolf-like creature to go head to head against the leader.
The leader tells him to step out of the way. The rama charges for Sheber. Kazim runs to his brother in time to save him. The wolf disappears knowing he stalled enough time for the kid to get away. The robbers are wondering what made the rama attack them. (Since ramas hate getting near humans) They noticed the boy with the backpack got away. They decide to look for the boy with the help of Kala, their pet raven.
Andy is wondering how he'll get home. When he hears voices.
Deer50 responds:
thanks :)
I don't blame for for avoiding the the hard stuff
You just want to get the story moving, show how imaginative you truly are, before you become bored, or less motivated with the series. But, you do risk recieving lower scores for it. I hope you find a way, or help, to make it all come together. This seems really promising.
P.S. Fight scenes are very beloved by the newground community and are highly encouraged, but you do what best suits you.
Deer50 responds:
thanks :)
NOT BAD!
At least it doesn't bore me!! keep it up!!
Deer50 responds:
thanks :)
Getting interesting!
I just watched the art before this and i must say you really improved your voice actors, but the sentences of the blue haired guy always seem gulped up. And I think his voice should be the best because he seems to be an important character in your series!
A very good voice was the blue guys brothers voice who didnt cry. The rest of the voices still needs to get more emotion and strength.
I didnt have any problem with the other aspects, the graphics and animations could get better, but they are good enough to make a superior series of this :D
All in all a nice contribution, exciting and fantasyfilled series.
Deer50 responds:
actually he has blue-black hair not blue xD. Anyway thanx :)
Cool
This is a cool addition to the series. I animation was good, and I can't wait to see how the first episode ends up. This is a great series and I've enjoyed both of the 2 parts submitted already.
Keep up the good work.
