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Avania: episode 1 part 1

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Oct 16, 2011 | 2:23 AM EDT
  • Daily 3rd Place October 17, 2011

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Okay I lied, maybe I'll post more on here if there are more better responses like on my other entry. Also I got sick of getting no comments on DA. I'll say it again. I don't care if you don't like it. Be resonable a say why you don't like it instead of posting insults like a little kid. it's super hard to animate and it's not fair for people to bash at them.
If you actually like this animation I have more parts on my website.
This just didn't come out like I was hoping it to. I have an image in my head of what the story is like and how it's supposed to look. Instead it came out looking choppy. Well, Adobe flash is like the hardest program to draw in.-.- I know is has so many flaws so you don't have to tell me. (Still remembering the appearance of the rabbit....*shudders*) And, yes I did get pretty lazy on the backgrounds. As for the voices. The main character's voice came out exactly how I wanted it. Sheber's was okay. The other three I didn't like. But what'd you expect I'm a girl doing a whole bunch of boy characters. I spent alot of time doing this. I tried my hardest to do my best and that's all that should matter. While I was working on it, something sped it up and I didn't know how to reverse it (and it wasn't the frame rate). So it's very fast paced. You have been warned O.O

Incase it was hard to follow I'll just summarize what happened.
A boy woke up an a tunnel not exactly having amnesia. He remembers his family, his friends, and his name. He just doesn't know how he got in this strange world. He meets a rabbit being, named Yates. And since that was the first thing he met he assumed that he landed in some rabbit world.
He talks to the rabbit and finds out that he can't get back home until he gets permission from every king in the world. (Apparently there are alot) The boy tries to lie to get back home but is caught by Yate's ball device. He is attacked by Yates. Later (after he escapes Yate's wrath) he's walking through a forest. Hears something and gets scared. He finds that it's just a person. Much to his relief this planet has people in it. He is soon robbed from behind. The robbers raid his backpack. They don't seem to know what the items in his pack are. The boy asks the first boy he saw (who seems to be their leader) for help but is denied. The boy gets angry and fights back by pushing the youngest robber down. The little boy robber named Sheber starts crying. That's when the leader took out a sword and aimed it at the boy.
I couldn't animate anymore than this because I didn't have enough computer memory to continue. So I'll have to do it in parts.-.-



Rated 5 / 5 stars


This series has potential! I wanna see more of this!

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Deer50 responds:

Thanks :)


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Story's really good, and that counts the most in any animation. Good Job!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Great Job :)

You have potential. Great Job!

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Deer50 responds:

thanks :)


Rated 5 / 5 stars

not bad

actually I liked the artwork pretty much and the voices were fitting!
the story wasnt hard to follow and has potential .
I'm lookin forward to the next episodes :)

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Deer50 responds:

wow, I never thought people would actually like this :)


Rated 4 / 5 stars

little rough looking

but not bad. work on your voice acting and get better equipment. but good stuff so far

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