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Avania: episode 1 part 1

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Oct 16, 2011 | 2:23 AM EDT
  • Daily 3rd Place October 17, 2011

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Okay I lied, maybe I'll post more on here if there are more better responses like on my other entry. Also I got sick of getting no comments on DA. I'll say it again. I don't care if you don't like it. Be resonable a say why you don't like it instead of posting insults like a little kid. it's super hard to animate and it's not fair for people to bash at them.
If you actually like this animation I have more parts on my website.
This just didn't come out like I was hoping it to. I have an image in my head of what the story is like and how it's supposed to look. Instead it came out looking choppy. Well, Adobe flash is like the hardest program to draw in.-.- I know is has so many flaws so you don't have to tell me. (Still remembering the appearance of the rabbit....*shudders*) And, yes I did get pretty lazy on the backgrounds. As for the voices. The main character's voice came out exactly how I wanted it. Sheber's was okay. The other three I didn't like. But what'd you expect I'm a girl doing a whole bunch of boy characters. I spent alot of time doing this. I tried my hardest to do my best and that's all that should matter. While I was working on it, something sped it up and I didn't know how to reverse it (and it wasn't the frame rate). So it's very fast paced. You have been warned O.O

Incase it was hard to follow I'll just summarize what happened.
A boy woke up an a tunnel not exactly having amnesia. He remembers his family, his friends, and his name. He just doesn't know how he got in this strange world. He meets a rabbit being, named Yates. And since that was the first thing he met he assumed that he landed in some rabbit world.
He talks to the rabbit and finds out that he can't get back home until he gets permission from every king in the world. (Apparently there are alot) The boy tries to lie to get back home but is caught by Yate's ball device. He is attacked by Yates. Later (after he escapes Yate's wrath) he's walking through a forest. Hears something and gets scared. He finds that it's just a person. Much to his relief this planet has people in it. He is soon robbed from behind. The robbers raid his backpack. They don't seem to know what the items in his pack are. The boy asks the first boy he saw (who seems to be their leader) for help but is denied. The boy gets angry and fights back by pushing the youngest robber down. The little boy robber named Sheber starts crying. That's when the leader took out a sword and aimed it at the boy.
I couldn't animate anymore than this because I didn't have enough computer memory to continue. So I'll have to do it in parts.-.-



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars


I must say this is bad. I'm only watching this cus it was on daily 3rd. Hope that you'll do better than this. Good luck

BTW I hate this gaylike style. If possible please create more man like man.

Deer50 responds:

If you do like it don't watch -.-
Flash is a hard program to draw in. It alters whatever you draw. You don't know what your talking about when you say it's "bad" because I see you don't have any flash animations in your profile. I would like to see you do better.
And what's with the "gay-like style." That makes me think this is coming from some 10 year old.


Rated 3 / 5 stars


this is pretty good - - i think your ideas and drawing skills are there - but whats missing is a bit of production value - - i think if you spent an extra few days to get different voice actors (all the voices are the same person ..least thats what it sounds like), and take a second look at the pacing you would have a really solid thing here

also consider adding music or ambient noise? - - but overall a good start, if you can stick with it ; )

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Deer50 responds:

thanks. I wanted to add a soundtrack. But I don't want to steal anybody's music.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


Overall It's good, a few tips here
Voice acting especially the main character needs to be more fluent, currently it's like he's reading from a book he's never read before and it's somewhat apparent, to improve this just have whoever is voice acting him basically repeat the lines to themselves while trying to get more emotion into each line.
Your frame rate movement is alright It could be improved a little by speeding it up and adding more frames, but you'll get use to it the more you animate.
Graphics could be improved with more shadings but it's acceptable for now.
Gonna go watch your next part, overall I still like your work.

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Deer50 responds:



Rated 3 / 5 stars

I enjoyed this... save the abrupt ending.

Someone must have given you a really bad review, because i think you are waaay to hard on yourself.
the art isn't bad, it's unique. though some flash looks cleaner than others, they often lack the personality of work animated frame by frame.
the characters are colorful and the plot is alright.
please conclude this one, i will find it.
oh, and you may need to get some friends to do voice acting, if there were multiple voices, it only sounded as one person (you i'm assuming)
again, too hard on yourself. you're talented, just give yourself the time you need to produce ^_^

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Deer50 responds:

thanks ^^
I'm a very cynical person. So I keep thinking everyone's going to think it's bad. I need to work on that >.<
As for voice actors I've got someone to help me with one of the characters.:)


Rated 4 / 5 stars

little rough looking

but not bad. work on your voice acting and get better equipment. but good stuff so far

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