i'm not too sure man..
i watched the first episode so this is for both - - i am starting my own series as well and i know its difficult - so my main advice is to really take the time to explain who the characters are and where things are taking place and make sure its clear
cuz i was confused as shit
i can tell though that you have putt a lot of effort into this - so keep it up and try really intregrating more explanation so its clear to all the viewers!