Seems aight for a beginner

It Look Like Not Finished, Cause You Are Beginner.
Maybe Soon, You Can Finished This Animation.

Bad and short.

Okay, it isn't finished

Try to make an opening menu, :D If you can! make your own characters to tell a tale of death for us please(Avoid using other peoples stuff :P just saying)

Damp the footsteps a bit, it's like hearing Bigfoot running behind you while have glass on the floor(eh, not the best way to put it but it is rather loud), altho the syncing is okay.

Give the fire some sounds of crackling, The Door opening sounds, ALSO don't make it loop :P

It's not finished.

This animation is a fragment. It's a piece of what could eventually be turned into a movie, but for now, it's nothing more than a part or a bit.

The problem is not if it's bad, but rather if it's good. When it's bad, it gets a low score and gets blammed and is forgotten and gone. Done.

If it's a 'good' piece, then people get confused and may pass it. The problem is that then we've got a fragment of a piece of a bit of a flash floating around newgrounds forever, and what's the point of that? That's not what Newgrounds is about.

What's here isn't bad. But if it passes, it'll be forever unfinished, because if you complete this into a vid, you'll submit the finished item as a separate item and we'll have both finished and unfinished items floating around here.

It's not bad. Just, please send thru completed items. :)