Not Bad :)
There was some parts where I felt like it went a little too slow, but I may just have been reading too fast. Or maybe there was just too long of a pause inbetween switching scenes. Its hard to say, but there was a problem with flow. Other than timing, I found the story to be fairly amusing. Good Job :)
Yeah, I too felt like I had stretched some things out, although I left them in for the slower readers. Also, I notice that whenever I switch to a new Scene within a Flash it kind of has a skip of music or sound.
But thank you for Critiquing, I'll be sure to take those into account in my next cartoons.
it was very good i really like it my favorite part was the creeper thinking what was it all for that was funny and my favorite part is that my friend Dingowalley made it.
Decent in some ways.
It was fairly long, and that's always worth recognition in a flash movie,
But it had some major flaws that brought it down, Some of the art was occasionally dodgy or inconsistent, and the menu buttons were unlabelled,
Still a strong effort however.
Yeah, I know. Some things I wasn't happy with myself, but overall I think I did a very good job. Thanks for the Critique, I will be sure to take those into account with the next 2 Cartoons I am working on.
I really like it! It's sad and funny at the same time.
That's what I was going for :D Thanks!
Good concept, inconsistent quality
I can't decide whether I like the art style. You nail some of the characters, but I feel most of the stuff with the creepers was rather poorly done. Take the subtitles for them, IMO you should standardize that and put it at the bottom of the screen. Also their "voices" really got on my nerves after a few mins. But then some stuff was really well done. Great choice of music and really nice voice acting. Also the story is long and pretty well done. The Minecraft vibe is strong. Good, but room for improvement.
I'm not the Best with Subtitles, and this was my first time really using them, so I know I was going to do poorly with them. The Creepers voices are suppose to be annoying (At least to us): They're creepers, not people.
But thanks for the Critique. I'll try to improve on the next cartoons I work on.