Let's Creep!

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"The Creepers ancestral home, a mighty mountain in the middle of no where, has been over run by Players! And the player plan to destroy the mountain! 2 Creepers, having had enough of the Players, decide to blow the players up with their own TNT boxes! Will they succeed? Or will they die and have their bodies looted for Gunpowder?"

Finally, I am finished! This thing took me well over 2 months to make. In the end, though, I felt like this was worth it. The Cartoon is over 7 Minutes long. Also, even though I had no intention of entering this into the Halloween Contest, since I was finishing it up yesterday I thought "When in Rome". Also, it does share one thing in common with Halloween: Dressing up.

I'd like to thank Ramthundar for being Dirken Irkan 19, the leader of the Players. Ramthundar has an awesome voice and you should definately use him if you need a voice actor. I'd also like to thank the Newgrounds Community for being supportive and helpful with my Other flashes. Hopefully this one will get me a trophy!

EDIT: YES! 5th PLACE! Thank you newgrounds community! Thank you all! :D


Not Bad :)

There was some parts where I felt like it went a little too slow, but I may just have been reading too fast. Or maybe there was just too long of a pause inbetween switching scenes. Its hard to say, but there was a problem with flow. Other than timing, I found the story to be fairly amusing. Good Job :)

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DingoWalleyStudio responds:

Yeah, I too felt like I had stretched some things out, although I left them in for the slower readers. Also, I notice that whenever I switch to a new Scene within a Flash it kind of has a skip of music or sound.

But thank you for Critiquing, I'll be sure to take those into account in my next cartoons.


it was very good i really like it my favorite part was the creeper thinking what was it all for that was funny and my favorite part is that my friend Dingowalley made it.

DingoWalleyStudio responds:

Thanks :D

Decent in some ways.

It was fairly long, and that's always worth recognition in a flash movie,
But it had some major flaws that brought it down, Some of the art was occasionally dodgy or inconsistent, and the menu buttons were unlabelled,
Still a strong effort however.

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DingoWalleyStudio responds:

Yeah, I know. Some things I wasn't happy with myself, but overall I think I did a very good job. Thanks for the Critique, I will be sure to take those into account with the next 2 Cartoons I am working on.


I really like it! It's sad and funny at the same time.

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DingoWalleyStudio responds:

That's what I was going for :D Thanks!

Good concept, inconsistent quality

I can't decide whether I like the art style. You nail some of the characters, but I feel most of the stuff with the creepers was rather poorly done. Take the subtitles for them, IMO you should standardize that and put it at the bottom of the screen. Also their "voices" really got on my nerves after a few mins. But then some stuff was really well done. Great choice of music and really nice voice acting. Also the story is long and pretty well done. The Minecraft vibe is strong. Good, but room for improvement.

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DingoWalleyStudio responds:

I'm not the Best with Subtitles, and this was my first time really using them, so I know I was going to do poorly with them. The Creepers voices are suppose to be annoying (At least to us): They're creepers, not people.

But thanks for the Critique. I'll try to improve on the next cartoons I work on.

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3.68 / 5.00

Oct 2, 2011
7:48 AM EDT
  • Daily 5th Place October 3, 2011