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Story Hero!

September 30, 2011 –
December 7, 2011
This entry was deleted.

Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

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Another game made by the same team (plus one, permanently, the team is almost complete!) of Icepunk, we think it's a good idea, you interact with the words in the story to beait it, it may need some more time on the oven, what do you think? Is it worth improving?


The idea for this game is definitely sound. I would love to play a full version of a game like this.

If you were to work on the presentation and add a more features to increase the variety of the gameplay I think it would be a great game to play.

One thing that might help is making it so that the player has better hints at certain items. The one with the orc confused me because I assumed there was something else that could defeat the enemy due to what the words said. Maybe that was just me though.

You could even make it so that some words let you fall down to lower or upper levels to go back and pick up other words. Kind of like a puzzle solving aspect.

I would certainly say it's worth improving though.

I found it creative since I've personally never seen a game like this. It was easy, but it still had me think just a little. I was disappointed that it was so short. But I enjoyed to story and the game as whole and look forward to the sequel.

I can say test succeeded. Please, continue your work.

This could really turn into something very good, given more elaborate stories and sensible hints as to which item would defeat which enemy. Perhaps with enhanced mechanisms (e.g. able to set things down, combine things, etc.). Excellent beginning of a possibly very good puzzle game =D

It was great!!!! Loved it! I would give it a 10 but it was to short and made me mad... ok ill give it a 10 but it was way to short! Love the concept though!


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3.58 / 5.00