This was cool
The subtitles really helped alot because i didnt understand what was going on, but the characters were amazing, This could have been longer maybe more scenes and such, Alright you do have something here I was actually pretty impressed with what you have going on here, I did however think some extras could be added and you could change some things, but overall you have done well on this. I would call this Cutting Edge and Ritzy, you have Turbo Charged it to full throttle and thats what I liked about this.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This could have been longer maybe more scenes and such