Could be worse
I think it's interesting how so many people agree on something that is certainly not canon. If there ever was a Super Saiyan transformation beyond 4, it would probably look like this. For the record, SS5 is a fan-made thing made for a fake series, Dragonball AF. My only problem is that you shouldn't really have tests for things here. People expect flashes to be more fully made. It does seem like this has potential for something a lot better.
The voices seem to be in pretty good alignment, even if it's not that good of a voice. Infinite loops are something you might also want to avoid. Are you planning on making something bigger with this? It would be better if you described exactly what you were trying to do. What kind of enemies would there be?