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The Old Ash Tree

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Sep 13, 2011 | 10:12 PM EDT

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This one is best with your volume up. The words to the narration are below:

My dear father died in a faraway war
Left Mother and I quite without hope
We used our last pennies to leave our fine city
And away to a house on a farm.
And on this farm, on the thorniest edge
Stood an ash tree as old as the earth
With branches so gnarled and twisted and black
That my every bone cried out to climb
"But no! Oh no!" said our funny old neighbor
Wringing her hands like two rags
"Don't you go near it, young Miss Eliza
For her roots are bad all the way down."
I thought it silly but did as she told
Until Mother went missing one eve
So sad had she been that I feared the worst
And went down to the old ash tree
And now here I stand but here there is nothing
Naught but a flowering weed
But the breeze, I could swear, carries upon it
The scent of my mother's perfume
Yes, the wind, I declare, does carry upon it
The scent of my mother's perfume



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

I liked it. Had a nice and creepy vibe to it. Keep up the good work!

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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

its a vary well rouned Flash

Good animation, Vary fitting music, good story line, and vary clear speaking. Only you lose points for not cutting out the intake of breath for the narrator. But other then that vary good gob :)


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

very creepy

so creeepy... awesome creepiness it was scary watching it in the dark... only thing is when you wrote the subtitle... "Yes, the wind, I declare, does carry upon it" Yes definitely was written in the cursive Sex, not Yes .. was this intended?

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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

If i saw that tree on our backyard i will burn it

good animation but make the story more thrilling and more longer nxt time


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


kk, I was waiting for this to load, and read manga while i waited, it was also like 12:00 when I watched it, and when the whispering started on it's own...

Freaky! and awesome, wish you'd done more with the animation tho