However the whispering is a little unintelligible and slightly irritating.
This was pretty bad.
and not in a good way, the animation was bad, the voice sounded like a highschool smoker whispering and the people where totally devoid of any emotion.
nice try at trying to be any sort of scary.
whispering was annoying...period.
lol i said period
I fucking loved it! When I was little about 3 years old, I told this exact same story to my pre-school teacher, she brought me to a room and called in my mother, she consistently told my mother I was an evil child and that I must be destroyed, and I was a damned spawn of Satan himself. I then started laughing dementedly, and she screamed and she told my mother that this was proof! I instantly stopped laughing and said "You're a retard."
Thank you! Art is so rare these days.
This is good work, your style on it's own really gives off a sort of dark and oldschool vibe, your whispers though were too fast and incoherent at times, I think you have the potential to do a lot better maybe with more decent equipment or simply by enhancing the audio or something :P
The whole poem was a delight to me. I love your writing, please don't doubt the quality of your work because it is incredible ^^ The images speak of their own story along the lines of the poem, it's really beautiful.
Hope to see more of you in the future! Keep up the good work! X)