Another stunning tale from a fine citrus fruit
I'm glad to see another one of these so soon. I already can't wait for the next one. I would offer advice, but I can tell you've got it down.
Author Comments
Animation and Drawing by Jason Moser
Background Drawing by Kenton S. Lime
Narration by Kenton S. Lime
Gentlemon's Voice by Tyler Vincent
Nothing
This isn't funny or amusing to me at all. The only reason you get 2 points is because the animation wasn't the worst I've seen. And you at least had one line for the character which matched the lips. Other than that, I didn't like this.
it makes sense.
I give you 10 for the coherence