I really liked it. It's like a clay-motion version of madness.
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for a better quality check out my youtube page here http://www.youtube.com/us er/duffosaur?feature=mhee
It seems like you had fun doing this flash
The sound FXs were decent and the music was not bad, and although the plot of the story involved the slaughter of clay-people for enjoyment, it was able to briefly achieve its goal. With practice, and more focus on the theme and plot of your story, I'm sure your flashes will improve. Of course, I doubt there was no story intended in this flash, but it doesn't hurt offering the viewer one either. It gives then something to follow along.
duffosaur responds:
thanks for your feedback its much appreciated, i will try and add more story to the next ones
alright
quite short and nothing out of the ordinary
duffosaur responds:
thanks for feedback hopefully my new ones will be longer and more out of the ordinary
Not bad...
...but i really would have liked some kind of a preloader. Plus i really don't think this should have been a loop.
duffosaur responds:
i'm new to flash and dont know how to do a preloader and i have no idea why its a loop i didnt mean it to be but thanks for the feedback its much appreciated , hopefully improve this next time i upload
short
too short bro, get some length
duffosaur responds:
thanks for that hopefully be making longer things in the future