brill

good

Too simple; kinda glitchy

Well, let's see here...1 star for ceativity, 1 star for innovative uses of the spikes/portals/invisible platforms, 1 star for the story, and 1 star for the graphics......
This flash is basically a building block for something that has potential for turning out to be absolutely astounding, assuming you put in more time and effort towards making your next flash.

nice but ...

this is made in game factory, which sucks .. alot ..
any way if you want to make a good game user flash and improve your graphics..

Too easy

The game is too short and easy. Make more levels, puzzles and more stuff.