i love this..it was so dark yet awsome. he kinda reminds me of n.cage
I think the art was beautiful and the narrative, the way the story was told was beautiful. I wasn't touched by the storytelling mostly because the majority I have been seeing on newgrounds both in games and in movies is "Dark" has a dark tone to it. Which for me, when things start becoming about death and gloomy all the time, it starts to get old. But that doesn't mean I didn't like your piece, it was a beautiful piece, great job for getting a first for the piece!
After watching Wellsh yesterday I was glad to see another project by you pop up so quick. Again great animation art and story. The voice acting again suited very well, so good job on the acting. Also the audio in this one came off better than in Wellsh. I was almost expecting the end to cut away to the dropped rat poison box to show that it didn't actually have rat poison in it. You didn't show exactly what was in the box but I saw a variety of containers so I was thinking sprinkles. I suppose we are left to wonder.
That said the only real criticism I have here is the automatic loop on the film. It would be nice if it stopped at the end. From there you could also link to Youtube or your website (if you have one) for people to see the full quality version. Just a thought because if people like the film they will visit to see the better version.
Once again great job I really hope to see more work from you in the future. Keep up the good work. 5/5 10/10.
Very impressive flash, I like the blend of animation mixed with real backgrounds. I also find the shades and value of colors fitting to the story. Very vague and ominous flash nonetheless.
the most incredible and disturbing thing i have ever seen