It`s ok
This video to be honest sucks but i watch that mouse vs mouse video and it was better so i hope in the near future you eventually get to the point where you are a great animator
Author Comments
This is just a short pokemon parody I made. I know it needs improvement. Anyway, the main plot is:
Pikachu kills another pokemon in a game of poker, and the police come after him and Ash. They then retreat to Las Vegas...
DrunkenMonkey123 responds:
Yeah... this does suck, but if you liked mouse vs mouse, then... why didn't you just review that?
To put it nicely...
It needs work. It has it's potential but it undoubtably needs work. Keep working eventually you'll get there.
Needs to be redone
If you really take more time to overhaul this and polish it then it could be good, nice idea just with poor execution.
Horrible
Saying that this needs improvement is an understatement. Nice walk cycle you got there, just make your character flip back and forth :D. No. Nice character design, looks like Satoshi Tajiri, the creator of Pokemon, drew it himself. No. I agree with TheSkoalBandit, looks like you did it in MS Paint in 5 minutes. Look up some basic animation tutorials and some anatomy tutorials, work on your art, That is all I can say.
DrunkenMonkey123 responds:
Thanks for the constructive criticism.
Bad
it looks to simple, and there is no story or something more interesting
lot of work to do
DrunkenMonkey123 responds:
That's right. Thanks for the review.