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This is my 2nd round entry for AlbinoBlacksheep TOFA 2011. I failed to make it to round 3 with this one.........
The theme was, the worst date or meeting ever !
It feels rushed as the ending comes as a surprise. A story as short as this should always reach climax at the end and this one doesn't. Great voices in my opinion
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