Funny
It feels rushed as the ending comes as a surprise. A story as short as this should always reach climax at the end and this one doesn't. Great voices in my opinion
Author Comments
This is my 2nd round entry for AlbinoBlacksheep TOFA 2011. I failed to make it to round 3 with this one.........
The theme was, the worst date or meeting ever !
Credits & Info
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4.02 / 5.00
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- Aug 29, 2011
- 2:54 AM EDT
- Genre
- Comedy - Original