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Totem Troubles

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This is my animation for Design and Technology multimedia. I made it completely on my on aside from some audio work with my friend. All of the voice acting (however bad it is hahaha) is done completely by my friends and I as is the music. This animation was meant to teach children the value of teamwork, friendship and helping others. This my first major animation and I'm hoping to get better and go into design at uni. Any constructive criticism is welcome, thanks for watching :)


Much better.

I'm glad you finished it since my last review. Looks like we've got quite a difference of opinions below. XD

The voice acting was bad in spots and good in spots. The animation was adequate, but like anything, could be improved upon. The story was quick, but fun.

If you added some plot elements, refined the animations and voice acting, and spent a whole lot of time doing it all, you would have a really solid flash here. :) Or you can leave it as it is and move on to something else. At least you did get this done and submitted, though. So that's good. :)

Sprinkles69 responds:

Thanks :), well I think Im going to leave this animation here, with this I was restricted to making a cheesy story so that it was "school appropriate" and same with the content. Plus I had to spend a lot of the time creating a portfolio which was ridiculous. I'm gonna move onto bigger and better things soon hopefully :)

Pretty nice...

The animation wasn't that good, but the story and voice acting were very good.
Good luck with future animations :)

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The animation in this was lacking but the voice acting wasn't that good to start with. I'd love to see you improve this, I think I'd enjoy this more if you showed their problems getting to the top of the mountain.

Sprinkles69 responds:

I had a lot more planned out in my head, but time was a major issue with making this even with all of the story cutbacks and editing I did I still only finished this a week before it was due.

Terrible animations

Not worthy of passing, i'm sorry.

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3.18 / 5.00

Aug 25, 2011
4:21 AM EDT