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Hello! :D I'm Montessa Guelas aka tgvulture aka MAart aka WinterChronos (yeah I can't decide on my name. :| ) It's been a while.
Yep. I'm still a newbie in flash but I think I have improved compared to my earlier entries. Even though, I know I'm still inexperienced so I hope you still appreciate this despite those conditions.
The concept was originally from "The Monster and I". Since I've decided this to be more serious, I've thought of a better title and Unparallel was created.
I hope you enjoy watching and look forward to this series. :D
Thanks to Macromedia Flash Professional 8. ^^
And Immediate Music of course for the music.
* sorry if the music and flash doesn't match. :|| mannn, the frames just kept on lagging. ugh. fixing it. :|
** fixed it! finally. :)) just comment if it's still not in sync. :(
Such a nice flash video. I can't wait for the series! Ü
Editing is nice.
The video is enticing to the storyline, and the editing is fairly understandable. It seems to me that you would benefit from taking a life drawing class, because you have your characters' images down, but the drawing level is still at an early stage. There are also how-to drawing books at local art stores. I think you have a lot of potential, and this advice isn't to put you down. I only spend this much time commenting to somebody whom I think could end up being a really good artist and storyteller. :)
Thankyouu. ^^ Yes I admit the level of my art is not striking. :( Actually I do want to take classes on flash but I can't because I have to focus more on my studies. :( So I have no choice but to use everything I have and create this because the story keeps on bothering me. Haha. But thank you very much on your advice. ^^
Evil, yet for a honorable cause, Good, but unspeakable things must be committed to get there?
Will we be able to tell which is which in the end?
Thanks! Yes, exactly. And yep, you will be able to tell which is which in the end (of the series that is). :D
Just a detail
The hands touching the wall in the beginning are wrong.
You should see the tumb.
Everything else great
Yeah. ._. I noticed that too. Haha. Sorry bout that. I found it hard to draw hands on that scene. Thanks btw. ^^
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