I didin't like it sorry :/ Two reason's why
1: The animation as abit.. messy
2: it was boring. The music didn't fit and the humor didn't make me laugh
BUT. In all fariness you put the time into it to make it a long animation so good job on that:D !!!
thank you very much! I'll do :D
I enjoyed this
But it is too long to not have voice actors, microphones are cheep, your looking to spend a £100 on a audio interface and another £30 on a decent microphone and XLR cable. get yourself and friends voices on future projects. The Free and easier option is to get voice actors from the forums to do the recording and send you the .wav files. If you ever need a voice actor I'll be happy to help, and I'm sure many other NGers will be happy to oblige. Keep up the good work, you are a good writer!
yes, the voices'll try next, thanks for your constructive criticism :DDDDD
I'm not sure what I just saw....
The plot is so complex and psychological. Absolutely stunning.
In all seriousness, The animation/art style was terrible. The humor fell flat (except for the chicken headed guys origin story and the brofist team up). The music was totally out of place (though, I think that may have been part of the joke?).
Improve the animation, and either get voice acting or use a more legible way than just placing the text in the middle of the screen. Try to make the text understandable (again, unless that was part of the joke?).
Overall, this is pretty terrible.
if music is a joke