I'm not sure what I just saw....
The plot is so complex and psychological. Absolutely stunning.
In all seriousness, The animation/art style was terrible. The humor fell flat (except for the chicken headed guys origin story and the brofist team up). The music was totally out of place (though, I think that may have been part of the joke?).
Improve the animation, and either get voice acting or use a more legible way than just placing the text in the middle of the screen. Try to make the text understandable (again, unless that was part of the joke?).
Overall, this is pretty terrible.