This was good for a clock day flash. It teaches about B.
Thanks for the review. Sadly I didn't have too much time so I couldn't make this any longer.
Happy Clock Day!
Lol. Little history lesson for all those noobies out there. Though you forgot to mention how we are now flooding the portal with crap every year and vote 5 on everything. But maybe the penguin was about to explain that when he blew up.
Anyway, I don't know if you drew the penguin yourself, but it looks rather nice I think. I think a replay button after the ending would have been nice, but then again it's not such a big deal. Let's not put too much effort into a silly clock day submission ^^
Overall 7 out of 10. By the way, I'm still eagerly awaiting the sequel to 'A Flash Made of B's part 4' ;)
PS: This is a resubmit. Reply plox? :(
"Reply plox? :(!
And here we have something for clock day yet its different, I did like the effort you are putting here but maybe more effort next time although it is clock day material so I understand it.
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More content would be nice but again I understand it being clock day and all.
With some more time (and yes, more effort) I might actually be able to put up a half-decent flash. But since I'm so very untalented my motivation to put more effort into flashes isn't very high. So, that's why I can only submit flashes on Clock Day, heh.
It shows more effort than the average Clock Day submission, IMO. It actually lasts for more than a couple of seconds, and it quickly describes how the Clock Crew started off, and why the Clock Day is set to this specific date.
Graphics are poor, and I was surprised not to see any clocks at all in this flash. Instead, a poorly drawn penguin. Animations weren't good either, at least the mouthing of the penguin, but I did somewhat like how you played with the writing.
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Sadly, the badly drawn penguin is the best I can draw, so that's why I will never submit any flash movies besides on clock day.
The missing of clocks isn't exactly true, I had an image of StrawberryClock in the flash! :P
Well, it was for Clock Day
So, this is a piece, regarding the most infamous flash in the history of Newgrounds. Some have gone on to offend more than B, but none of those have spawned 10 years of anniversary celebrations... yet.
You might have gone on a little to mention that SBC was a really talented animator, that everyone loved. Through his inspiration, people took up the tools of Flash and created their own works, hoping to emulate his wonderful style, panache and writing abilities.
The penguin was decent, though I was a little concerned by the speakonia pronouncing "2001" as "20-01". Surely it should have been two thousand and one, correct?
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Yes, but Speakonia didn't pronounce "2001" correctly. Maybe I should've just typed it out as "twothousandone" instead of typing the numbers.
Glad you liked the penguin. I didn't draw it in quite a long time and my drawing skills just suck. So, usually I can draw the penguin much better.