Better than the second one
I liked this one better than part 2, The Coffee joke worked alot better in this one but the random typos i'm still yet to understand
Not too bad
Could have done with some background music or something, and the frame rates are erratic, making it look jumpy and disjointed. Good effort though, keep at it and you'll do fine!
For a first flash ever, this is great. Most stuff you see on here for first timers is bad. This was unexpected. Yes it could be improved, but he will learn.
Just keep doing flash and you will be greater guy. I would recommend a replay button, and try adding your voice if you feel comfortable doing so. The speaking bubbles are fine but maybe you could talk and do subtitles at the bottom? Maybe, just a suggestion. But again great for a first flash.
Great for a beginner!
im a beginning flash artist as well and i have to say for your 1st movie its awesome!
theres some things id like to point out:
1. in my opinion it is running to fast u should lower the frame rate
2. theres a small typo at the end
the coffie joke was delivered at the right time as well
good luck to you in the future!