So, this is what we waited 2 and a half years for?
Looking forward to your upcoming work.
You made a fun little flash, and now you've got me attached to your characters.
Animation: Limited, but full of personality! I really want to live in that world, because it's so lively and cute. It made the funny parts even funnier because of his expressions, especially the "I have a job!" part.
Voicing/music: The voice acting was not ideal, but it was decent enough to convey your story fine. The music choices were suited and funny. Try to improve on your voice acting and it will make a really huge difference.
Story: As a cartoonist myself, I know how to make characters that the audience will associate with. There is the lovable main character who's intelligence is lacking, they are evil in a cute way, and create alot of the humour. There is always the friend of the main character who is the strict boring one, but together they make some great comedy. Well done in that department.
I'm interested in how you'll make this series progress. Keep at it and you'll get better.
This is so good,it looks like Eddsworld made it
eddsworld has nothing to do with it
You hit it once again Pivot!
There aren't enough series on Newgrounds.
I can't wait to see more!