I like how the fat guy didn't float away.
Kinda like a PG collab between Chuck Palahniuk and Don Hertzfeldt.
Easy going animation for a relaxing half hour
I actually quite enjoyed the animation as it flowed in all aspects, from music to narration to animation. The artsy cartoon style and pastel colors appeal to me, as well as the qualities of the animals, clouds and people.
I don't exactly understand the story per se, as events don't seem to always have an (obvious) consequence, for example the moon stepping on the boy. The diary tone of the story is also questionable when the moon "never forgives himself" since it suggests the entry is written long after the fact. Small things-to nitpick-about aside, this animation was a fluid, passively engaging tale (is that even possible?). It was great.
wow! Just wow!
I really like the picture of human life you paint in this flash; it was entertaining, true, and very emotional. I especially liked the story line of the invisible man.
But at some times the emotions of this flash seemed misdirected. I felt like some of the moon drama was manufactured- the scene with the moon stepping on the boy seemed completely phoned in- a fabricated source of sympathy.
The biggest flaw, however, was the voice actor of the moon. He did not enunciate, emphasize, or articulate his words. He was a pain to listen too- he sounded like an awkward teenager who had never voice acted before. As an actor and a voice actor, I must say that allowing this guy to play the moon was your biggest flaw.
Especially in juxtaposition to the invisible man and shadow voice actors, who were pretty much excellent.
For a half an hour film, listening to a hard to hear voice actor really takes a compounded toll.
Also, I'm not sure why the moon did what it did. As a character, its actions and emotional were largely chaotic and unexplained. He seemed like more of a handy foil / plot device.
Reeked of true emotional expression, however, which I loved.