00:00
00:00
Newgrounds Background Image Theme

Jing168 just joined the crew!

We need you on the team, too.

Support Newgrounds and get tons of perks for just $2.99!

Create a Free Account and then..

Become a Supporter!

Dont forget the trash!

Share Collapse

Author Comments

G'day viewers
This is an early movie from TVGravy
hope you like
Sorry for the looping

Log in / sign up to vote & review!

UUMMM... WHAT? OH WELL... WHATEVER, NOT BAD.

Well... that was weird...
First things first. The idea is really good, BUT, the voices feel kinda weird, mostly the "screams", if they are screams at all, when he starts his weird hallucination and when he explodes.
I think you could really improve the voice, giving your a clip a better "presentation" and better scores (don't worry about me, I gave you 5 xp).

The art was not bad, but at the same time not so good, something was missing, maybe a little details on James' face would improve it. And you should definitely improve the hallucination scene, not just making James' face in green, blue and red moving from side to side, and adding a colored background.
If you come up with a new "trip" for James, the video would be more interesting.

And finally, the music, no complaints on it, it is very good, is very interesting. I was wondering if you could tell me the name of the song and the performer, it really caught my attention.

So, in the end, good video, could improve quite a bit, and you shouldn't stop working on stuff like this, like I said, the idea is very good and it can be exploited to come with new ideas. So, good job lad, keep it up, always up.

tvgravy responds:

thanks man. we are working hard to fix quality issues and put more detail into the art!

nice

good start, nice idea

tvgravy responds:

thank you

YES!

BEST FLASH ON NEW GRAND!

tvgravy responds:

thanks buddy

Quite funny

This was quite funny for an original. If you can, try to upload a version where the audio is synchronised with the mouth movements. If the audio file is in a .mp3 format, consider converting it to .wav.

tvgravy responds:

thanks for the advice

Credits & Info

Views
4,299
Faves:
2
Votes
4
Score
4.63 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 3, 2011
2:58 AM EDT