You just got pwned by the vader-a-nator. Later, don't be a hater. Good job.
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Edit: Daily Third, bitches.
Yeah, this is my first time actually trying a new style of flash animation. Well, it would be cool in the earlier days of Newgrounds.
The jokes came from when me and my cousin were playing Star Wars Battlefront.
Dosensuppen responds:
BEST IN THE WOLRD!
Room for improvement.
Hate to say it, but this flash is pretty average. However, you could definitely expand upon this and make a successful series. The voice acting was rather grainy, I don't know if it was just an effect or not. But it was hard to hear. That's really just the main issue. There were a couple moments that made me chuckle. However, you may want to make your videos longer, leaving more room for jokes. There are plenty of Storm Trooper parody videos around the internet, maybe you could look at some for inspiration, and turn this into something truly great.
Dosensuppen responds:
Yes, the audio was an effect. They're in helmets, what do you expect? I will not, however, look for other storm trooper parodies for inspiration, the idea is already set in stone. This was more to get it out there, and it is out there, and apparently doing well.
Hilrious!
Vader-nator bein a hater on new guy!
Dosensuppen responds:
This is true, yo.
Its all good
There's nothing really wrong with this- The sounds, art, animation voices etc are everything they need to be and it is funny, especially if you are familiar with SW.
Its a one-scene gag, so it doesn't need much, but it does have some length- a little character creation.
The voices are not always easy to hear, but then they would be hard to hear with all that gear on!
I like it- do more!
Dosensuppen responds:
You're always too kind, Ice.
effort
aha cracked me up but voices not good quality.
Dosensuppen responds:
More information on how the voices are not good quality would be nice
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Daily 3rd Place August 2, 2011