i see your trying
i see u ment it to be a test animation man but try adding some sound in it also its funny i kinda giggled so i give u an 8 and a 5 man i hope u have a great future on newgrounds
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Ha, i know its not very good, but i hope it made you smile :)
im still learning to use flash and hope to get to grips with it :)
oh yeah, its not my joke :)
Good
It was a nice short animation, although the animation could improve and audio would be nice. Don't get discouraged though as you are just starting improvements will come with time.
good
This is good, but it could use some work. Like others have said, it would make more sense if you had said abortion. Also, some sound is always a good way to improve things.
I think you got the joke wrong
I heard it as abortion, not adoption. Anyway, improve the artwork. It looks a little like you rushed through it, even for a short animation like this one. Audio would also be nice.
Turtlepoop responds:
dammit, and yeah it was rushed i just wanted to use flash really
no sound and i think you mean abortion
however the animation was ok you should really work more on your knowledge and try to get sound next time
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