every1 below me until it hits nirudelta this is for you:FUCK YOU,for hellninja only:WELCOME TO HELL,and the creator NICE!!!
Author Comments
This is the first part to my movie "Going to Wonderland." I know it sounds cliche or used, because it's "another Alice in Wonderland story," but I don't necessarily follow the original. This movie is more like a movie with the name of "Wonderland" because it fits around a story that I have of my own.
WOW! Daily Third! Thanks so much for watching it!!
eh.
good story and good voicing, but the maplestory graphics es bad...also...THAT'S NOT A SCRIPT, THAT'S A SCROLL!
Maple Story....
I was drooling i the begining from the still images you used and the music sheet and the nice voice of the narrator...then maple story shows up and I suddenly dont want to see any more. Your original art would have been jsut fine...you could make it story book style in stead of shitty Maple story Style. Oh well i hope the next one dosent let me down as soon as the story actually starts like this one did...
good start but issues
great pacing up till the start of the story the voices were a bit wooden only due to they fact they werent coherent rhythmically. other than that im interested. hope to see more
also nice aniamtion with the sprites good work
Not bad.
This has a ton of potential. Loved your intro. It completely drew me into the story and I was totally prepared for an epic tale. But then it ended all of a sudden. Too quick of an ending is the major flaw for this. I understand it's a part 1, but there's no cliffhanger, nothing to keep me interested for the next part. It just.. stops.
Also, on a developer's note: PRELOADER- you needz one.
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Daily 3rd Place August 1, 2011
