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watch it on youtube : http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=1FwEStlfZaY (wihout the spaces)
*I accept any kind of criticism but If you dislike anime styled animation or non-voice actored animation, i suggest you kindly leave this page and don't waste your time here*
I have this idea of "boss chasing employee" stuck in my head for several days until I decided to make a flash animation of it. It's been a while since I animate anything, so enjoy ! Hope you like it.
A flash animation parody of Touhou Rampaging Sakuya.
Runtime : 4 mins 37 secs
Tools used : Flash 8
Thank you for the daily 2nd !!! For those who were wondering what happened to the girl in the end, please look at my gallery journal (deviantart)
Thank you for the front page ! Newgrounds rocks !
It wasn't terrible, but there are several things that could be worked on.
I like the premise overall, and it could be something really funny (though I was a little put off when I found this was a copy of a Touhou video), but it's got some hangups that really bring the piece down...
The sequences between chase scenes felt much too slow in comparison to the fast music going on through the rest of the piece. This made the bits inbetween chases seem sluggish and a little bland. The situations were chuckle-worthy, but they lost their punch quickly after lingering on-screen for a while.
The chase sequences themselves seemed a little bland as well. It was mostly just the same running animation with the characters being dragged to different positions on screen. I liked the few little change-ups you did near the end, but it would have been nice to see more of those during the entire animation.
Last thing: the syncing was a little off when it came near the end of the animation. Severely threw off the flow.
Like I said, this wasn't a bad piece, really, but it definitely has some room for improvement.
Thank you very much for the suggestions and review :D
the music got annoying after a while, that is all.
all i can say is awsome!!!!!!
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Fun concept, and it's nice to see someone with this art style (a manga influenced drawing style) make it to the front page. I loved the music nice setting for the miles of Office Space they spanned. I thought it was funny the 4th person didn't even get a chase, just face down in a pool of blood, ha. Although you'd think something like: "Super-Human ill tempered boss" would be in the job description.
the troll face part made me lol quite a bit, then it was all lol from there on out. very nicely done
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