This one was definitely better. I think the worst thing was how it was a bit too long. It shouldn't have been so talky. Okay, there were no was no actual audio, but you get the idea. That's a pretty cool song at the end. I had no idea what was going on.
I don't know why this stick guy was agree to all this! Well, he is pretty durable, I guess. You said "broke four rips", not "ribs". The best part was probably with the AK-47. I appreciate the higher quality.