Super Mario Bros SMASH In

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This is the intro for the new series I'm making, Super Mario Bros SMASH. It involve Bowser taking over Mushroom kingdom, and Mario, with some of his friends, have to slowly gain vantage points, to win an all out war between Koopa and Toadstool.

EDIT: I redid the song to match the flash. My computer runs slow, so what you saw was faster than what I saw. Now it's better.

New EDIT [10-5-11]: Redoing parts of my intro for my show, trying to make the animations more smooth.

New EDIT [4-25-12]: Finished all the intro. With episode 1 coming out soon, I fixed everything about my intro. Now it's cooler.


you can argue it all you want...

but this is the same concept used by SMBZ. Not saying it's not well done. but it's really lacking originality. 3/5'd.

Joe-You-Know responds:

Sorry, though i was inspired by Alvin.
I looked at his intro 1000 times trying to see what I wanted in my intro. His work I noticed didn't have fight scenes and i included that in here. I appreciate your honesty, and your perception. A lot of the ideas I used i got from watching SMBZ intro, but my actual series in which I have my script done and the voices voiced is so different. I tried to make something original, but for the intro I did use a lot of things I saw off the smbz intro. :)

prety nice

But its to much like DBZK and/or SMBZ... If you give it a more Mario style then DBZ it would look more entertaining, try a gain and you will sucsed!

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Joe-You-Know responds:

I have to agree with too much DBZ. I really didn't want to include so much that looked like DBZ. I just had to rush my intro a bit to meet my deadline. I really meant to be a more mario kind of thing. I really don't want to copy Alvin's work, and I don't plan on like Mario going around finding something, rather him fighting back with huge scale battles with like 100 koopas and toadstools fighting all at once

Needs Improvement

Looks cool and all, but it needs something called sound. Sound effects, music, that sort of thing. Until then, it will be lame.

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Joe-You-Know responds:

I know, but usually in intros there is no sound. I already have all my sounds lineed up for my next episode. The song theme was there. If you couldn't here it then I'm sorry. But for intros you usually don't see much of sound effects. I will make sure in my episodes, however, that there are plenty of sound s to please the audience.

Lame. Another SMBZ flash.

I love reviewing these shitty SMBZ ripoffs and there's no end in sight. This is the second Mario Bros. Z intro I've seen with the DBZ Kai song. Only the other one had better animation. Plus you used the Japanese audio, which is ten times more irritating.
Your sprites are low quality and your animation is twitchy. You also need to learn when to use graphics instead of movie clips and vica versa. I can forgive the shitty animation if you put out an entertaining story, but for an intro/test? Not a chance!

Joe-You-Know responds:

It's is NOT a smbz ripoff. although I do like his work, my series is way different than his. My series doesn't include sonic, and even though it didn't portray it in the intro, it isn't Dragon Ball Mario oriented. I did rush the intro, so I'm sorry you're unpleased, but I have in my story hundreds of koopas and toadstools fighting, and I wasn't able to show that in here like I wanted. Thank you for the review.


Back in my day, Mario and DBZ were not the same thing.

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Joe-You-Know responds:

I'm sorry you didn't like it. :/ I tried to include less Dragon Ball oriented things, because my actual series, really doesn't have beams everywhere and people yelling kamehameha or something, rather it has full scale battles and not as much dragon ball thing. I really wanted to keep them seperate. I did kind of rush my intro a bit and I wasn't able to put as much full scale battle between koopa and toadstool, so sorry.

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3.41 / 5.00

Jul 26, 2011
3:41 AM EDT