this shit has bored me!!!
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This is a new series I am making, its all about Sonic, Megaman, Zelda and Im going to throw in some Kingdom Hearts
This is just a demo/test, and its FRPS is really bad but its ok i guess.
Im going to add Music and Sound Effects and put more frames in. Hope you enjoy.
THE QUALITY IS REALLY BAD!!!!! you cant even read what they are saying... when I realeas episode 1 the problem will be fixed! I promise!
R-o-X-a-S
hey man its iamhyper11 nice animation~
nice dude ;D
R-o-X-a-S responds:
Kind words.... but seriously... r u blind?
Choppy
The animation is very choppy and the text is unreadable, and the whole thing could use with some music and sound effects. Also you can't just throw random characters together, you have to give context to why they're there and what they're doing. I find this is a big problem on Newgrounds.
I give you points for effort, but this definitely needs a lot more polish.
R-o-X-a-S responds:
Thank to for your critisim. And your completly rite. Sorry for wasting ur time i will improve the quality and i will ad music but the reason the quality is so bad is coz i used a video to flash converter but yeah soz i dont have flash yet. My Appologies
u need alot more frames
this is not something u show
R-o-X-a-S responds:
Ok thx. and i will add more frames
I love to criticize these crappy Sonic flashes.
Just because you point out the flaws in your description, doesn't mean they are forgiven. The quality of this is so bad that the text isn't even readable. I'm thinking this was originally a video you imported into flash.
I still fail to understand why people submit these super-shitty teasers and then claim that the first episode will be better. Why even bother with the teaser in the first place? If your trying to get people excited about your series, this is not the way.
R-o-X-a-S responds:
ur rite about everything... i did use video-to-flash converter.... i will get flash and add music and that and i will not subit teasers anymore... thx for ur critism