A masterpiece of the 21st Century ~Dylan

very simple but i would say fun the controls are easy to follow and there is no lag good job
p.s the controls are the arrow keys

not good

i has no story very lazy animation no sound and the programming is terrible it's hard to jump with him and again the animation are very lazy not good at all

umm..what the hell?

These were my thoughts when playing:
"This is labeled as a game, so I assume it should be interactive, and what do you know? It's not (?)"

"I can't move the character >:C Oh wait, I'm not the black thing? The only thing that's distinguishable from the rest of the scene? I'm instead the square that looks nothing like a character?"

"Typical, no sound..."

"Awesome face WTF? First a black fuzzy thing and now a smiley face?"

Seriously, this game doesn't make any sense (+it's too easy).

I suggest that when making flash, always avoid 'Games Factory' 'ClickTeam' and 'Yoyo Games', their game making software is all crap, use flash, the program MADE for this, instead, and the annoying intro junk and Java buttons are cut in half

My advice is that you should never publish a game if it has cheap graphics, or if it was made in something other than flash anyway, it's always buggy. You should always look at the game in a critical way and say

"Do I really think this has a chance to get featured in the front page? Or am I just uploading this to show off my programming 'skill' to my friends?"

If it's the latter, then this is usually the result, and it is lucky to pass judgement.

One thing that could come out of this is the 'turd of the week' award, and at least then, you will get famous for a week.

I'll give a 3 for the effort.

An advice.

Don't submit your first ever flash game, i don't make games but still, it's crappy, and you should know that.

Keep practicing and when you got a decent game, upload it.