You seriously need to do something with the players character. I'm guessing he is supposed to be carrying a sword but frankly it looks like he has an erection. Other than that I'm afraid I have to agree with Cunas points.
Did i miss sth?
Sorry, but i cant give any star to this "game".
Graphic: -3 / 10 (i mean ... what is this? Only your tiny skull at the selection board (Newgrounds -Flash Portal) looked interesting ... Your rest graphics are just bad doodles which where made in 3 sec with mousepad or sth.)
Sound: 0/10 (there was no sound)
Common things which belong to a game:
- Replay button (missed)
- Start Button (ok at least there was sth. like a start button)
- Upgrades? - (not a bit)
- Levelselection? (o.O)
- more than 10 Level? (not even a 2. stage!)
- Weapon? (no)
- Anything special at all??? (he can jump ... woohoo -.-)
Okay... i think you get my point. This was just a bad result of a tiny tutorial on how to do a jump&run on flash.
Please try again - maybe with more effort.
im hoping the full version will be much better and it would be smart not to have the full version at a price... nobody would buy it
for a demo, it had all the basics of a platformer. nice job.
The demo looks great. If the main game is on par with this it should be a really good
game. I cant wait for the full version.
of course since it is only a demo I can't give any more than an 8.