this was not fun

when u pick name it dont even show up later in game u dont get option to pick pokemon it was too fast and looked like stick drawings

I know it's hard..

I agree with Nuckel that it is the lack of ideas, and even ifyou had your ideas planned out.You should consider every scene element such as background and dialogues. Anyway, keep trying hard, one day, you'll make us all go 10 stars :)

my eyes, my ears, my goodness...

Well, if you are not able to come up with something better than this using TGF2 then you should switch to Flash or an equaly powerful application... I dont use MS Paint for image manipulation either. Though I do have the feeling that it is the lack of ideas that is responsible for this outcome and that a better program wouldn't have helped much.