The animation is a little choppy.
I think you should add a few more frames to this. (:
And some type of Transition so you KNOW it's an intro for sure.
ok!! i shall keep it in mind...
I agree with ericho
Test should be sent to a partner in animation or simply not put on at all, while the animation is good i still have to give this a four
A big nono
While the animation isn't half bad for this, the main fault is that it's a test. Those kinds of things are not popular on this website. At least make a button so that we can replay the thing. It's hard to describe this submission because there isn't a lot that happens. I actually do think that you have some talent in terms of art because this drawing itself isn't that bad. The best part was probably the way the blood comes off her fingers.
Still, that seems more like the kind of thing you would want in an art submission. I don't see why it would not say "Presents". It makes sense to me. The audio isn't that bad, but the problem is that it is simply too short in order for it to be a decent submission in its own right. An interesting story would do a lot of good for this.
well.. sorry that i've put a test because i'm still learning.....the thing of presents is that , at first, it was written «evil never looked so good» (which is my motto for most of the stories not yet published)
here's the original thing i've did http://evilblackcat13.deviantart.com/
I agree with ageReason
Obviously there's other places to test this, and the only reason I clicked on it, truthfully, was because of the low score. Otherwise, I would've had no intentions at looking at this. And besides, you should've known people wouldn't like it anyways, tests don't belong on NG.
yeah yeah...somebody told me about the forums.... but i'm scared of them and also... do you know how to remove flashes?
no wips on front
I would rather see an actual submission without intro than this. The dump and the forum would be a more suitable place for testing material.
yeah.. sorry for this....i'm still learning....and also.. i'm not up to this... those forum.... i feel like i gonna get shit and stuff...