Wow for a second animation is rly good. I do want to say that it kinda annoys me that at some 'events' don't have sound (i tought i was going to be like that for the whole flash), I'm talking about moments like the bee flies but you can't hear it, or the guy makes a some face expression and i expect him to at least breath out, when the girl is looking through here stuff. So just try to put some effort on the detiles (sound and visual). But i have to say I'm impressed for a newcomer (like me) you are doing great, the idea and compositon was good. And btw you don't have to leave big pauses... i don't know maybe i'm a bit inpatient. Hope to see more of your animations !