What can I say, I enjoyed it, enjoyed every little bit and phrase, and especially the way you've tied Coma into this one too. Poor Pete.
And the ending... I think I understood why it was what it was, and I think it should be like this. And I'm not sure what _you_ meant by this story, but I have a theory of my own. I don't want to spoil the fun for the others, but let's just say that I'm enjoying my System pretty much and I'm not going to kill Mama whatever Felix says. (Not my Mama anyway >.>)
P.S. I believe the medals are bugged, 'cause I found all the secret items, but never got any medals.