thanks for trying
just put more time and effort into things and it will show. I'm presuming your new and thats great, gives you all the room in the world to improve design, plot, and concept ^_^
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Liek there is this elepant n he all liek walking n there is also stuff floating and yea.
not too bad, not the greatest...
being on a loop, makes it get old after a few times. also, it looks like it is skipping every other frame, making it jumpy at best. at the end, the short 2-3 clip at the end, was so fast i did not even know what to make of it.
keep trying, by smoothing out the animation, adding more to the background, and forming somewhat of a plot (not just abstract) for people to follow.
most importantly, take your time and never give up. i know these things can wear you down after a while. keep at it and one day you will be making great shorts that people will want to add to their favorites list!
Needs more work.
You should probably slow the frame rate down on the first part. The second part could use improvement by putting more time into making the animation more smooth and fluid- like the first part seemed to be.