TBone-sama is sugoi! Nyanerra sugoi sugoi! Baka gaijin no rikey video grame? Bah!
Why did you submit?
Why would you submit this before it isn't finished? It's a shooter that you can't actually shoot yet. Even if you say, "just avoid the enemies", the hero is too slow and the enemies are too big for it to possible to avoid them. I'd give you some pointers, but I can tell by your long author comment that you really only meant to waste everyone's time with this.
This didn't seem to have very much thought put into it at all, more just a hey I submitted this and woo it didn't get blammed. Next time flush the idea out a bit, fix bugs actually have a game that is on the verge of working...
This is awful
I don't have to say much more than that. The shooting function doesn't work yet, the buttons are off center, you are using the worst font ever, Times New Romans, you can select text, and It's no fun. At all.
In short, it has no "anime feel" to it. Instead it has that "crap feel" to it.
I hate it when shitty designers upload shit and then write paragraphs asking how to improve themselves. Here's how: make a game you would enjoy playing, not shit.