Little short but very okay
The art is very nice. The character walking is well animated. Although the movie is really short and i don't like its repeating itself but for a first entry its very cool done.
Thanks, I didn't know how to add play buttons when I made it.
More than anything else i would like to say: very good starting animation. i am going to put my trust in you: make another good animation with a plot. i am counting on you to do it. be sure to keep up your animation and good luck in the future.
It's Crunk Fo' Shizzle!!!
Nice work, but the hunter's a friggin' moron!!!
I must say..
I really liked the animation,i'm not going to talk about the joke now because i understand you wanted to practice and not make something to get place in the frontpage.the animation was very smooth and the charcter movement was great.i think the bird movement is ok to but you can work on it if you like.sound was good too but it could be really nice if you add some forest\jungle sounds.and one more thing,please add a newgrounds preloader to your next flash it is really really easy.
and about the joke(sorry i have to haha :D) it could be funny if after writing "don't kill...." you would write just kidding! don't look into a gun!................its fu**ing stupid!.................seriously don't do that.
good luck :D (i know this is long im sorry..)
Thanks - yes i know the story could of been better, i'm planning on re-animating this with a different style, and improving on the plot. Thanks again for the high sore!
Don't kill wildlife.
You will be struck with one of the oldest cartoon cliches in existence.
(You asked for constructive comments? You have one. Don't base your punchlines on overused cliches. When LooneyTunes did it, it wasn't so old, so it was good. Today, it is cliched and obvious. Humour comes from UNEXPECTED. You set up expectations and SUBVERT them. It would be funnier if the rifle DIDN'T shot, because it wouldn't be so predictable.
What is good though, is art. It is good example of using Madness graphic style, without copying it. You get 2 and 6, respectively on /5 and /10 scales.)
Yeah, i originally wasn't planning on posting this to Newgrounds - it was just kind of a bit of fun and practice. If I had been planning to publish it here in the first place, i would have probably made the effort to give him a more original death.