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Jun 17, 2011 | 12:57 PM EDT
  • Daily 5th Place June 18, 2011

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I actually made this little flash last Christmas, trying out a rough drawing style and learning a little more about adobe flash. I asked one of my friends to do the audio, it was a good opportunity to practice a little teamwork with sound/pictures... However, it's been a very busy year and she only really had the chance to finish it up now. So here you go, it was my first real attempt with a little frame by frame animation (since my former submission actually was made after this one), hope you enjoy!

EDIT: the sound should have been fixed now



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


I've seen better, but I've also seen worse. I could see it being a lot better with more practice.


Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Bad animation and graphics

I think you should work more on your post-production. Your animationa needs to be more fluid too.
Bad plot, it doesn't creates suspense or anything else.
Try harder next time, and don't give up.

PS: sorry my crap english


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Yes, it was a problem.

The art, and direction it was going in was amazing. A silver dragon, glowing in the moon light, beautiful, and majestic. However, the sync was way off, the flash lagged on the lowest quality on both my house computer, and laptop. It didn't even end on a good cliff hanger, It ends with a bunch of guys laughing at the dazed dragon so is there a sequel or is it dead?
You could have put more detail into the dragon as well in some parts, to show the beauty of it glowing in the moon light and what not. All in all, it was an okay flash. Hope to see another without the problems.

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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


The sentiment it 's easy to transmit but somewhat difficult to put in words...


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


You drew the dragon wings like feathered bird wings, instead of reptile dinosaur wings that most people use, which makes them look delicate and cooler... Anyway, your drawing style is awesome, and with a story like that you can't help but feel sorry for them...
But in general, the story was rather short. I was hoping for a learning to fly video but it went in a completely different way... Sad, unfortunately. The sound was a major problem too... I understand that you had syncing problems but the laughing mid track completely threw me off... Great job but it needs work

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